Queen of mountains, Lord of rain
Why so quiet, as if in pain.
No place to wonder, no one to talk
You are so alone to even take a walk.
Long trees with branches free
We feel alone when amidst we are three.
The scenario is green
But seems it lacks a screen.
Elephants, Panthers and pythons
Supposedly the journey is full of thorns.
So much silent, so much calm
No road with a traffic jam.
Winters cool and summers hot
Enough to dry up waterΒ Β shots.
But still the best place in the world
Will always be my family world.
he he he..to be honest..i have already read this…:)
well, welcome to blogging world..Feeling great to comment first on your site.. π
keep bloggging..keep coming π
All the best
cheers π
Thank you so much jayendra….. hope i continue dis journey long.
why were you not blogging till date? why?!!
This poem is so much better than the over rated self acclaimed poets in blogosphere….
way to go!
thanks chintan for your support… i would surely come up with my ideas π
@chintan..
you saw this…she took my one post..now I’ll have to write one for myself, I was about to post this in mine so that she could understand how good she writes π¦ π¦ π¦ π¦
Isn’t her writing is good..I told her..she was not believing me π¦
gud1….aftr smdays da 2nd part ll come named “used 2 b quiet valley” wd lots f traffic jams….
yes nihar exactly…. dats gonna happen soon.
it was a bouncer for me…i hope i would have been there wid u to give u company in ur solitariness…..;)
Wat u want to say is a bouncer to me……nyways thanks….:)
Hey !!!! Nice Poem !!!
Please Feel free to share your world !!!
Welcome as Blogger !!!
Thanks ankit ..:)
Awsome dear…u think so deep …gr8…keep it it up.
Thanks situ π
1st Love with Nature…… very nice……… & I can say Fantastic Start…… π π
Keep it Up…… π π
thanks shanu ….:)
gr8…. finally u did it… gr8 ideas..nature lover..how do u think so deep!!!!
ya atul… finally i penned it down…:)