Queen of mountains, Lord of rain

Why so quiet, as if in pain.

No place to wonder, no one to talk

You are so alone to even take a walk.

Long trees with branches free

We feel alone when amidst we are three.

The scenario is green

But seems it lacks a screen.

Elephants, Panthers and pythons

Supposedly the journey is full of thorns.

So much silent, so much calm

No road with a traffic jam.

Winters cool and summers hot

Enough to dry up waterΒ  Β shots.

But still the best place in the world

Will always be my family world.

This entry was posted in poetry.

17 comments on “QUIET VALLEY

  1. he he he..to be honest..i have already read this…:)

    well, welcome to blogging world..Feeling great to comment first on your site.. πŸ™‚

    keep bloggging..keep coming πŸ™‚

    All the best

    cheers πŸ™‚

  2. why were you not blogging till date? why?!!

    This poem is so much better than the over rated self acclaimed poets in blogosphere….

    way to go!

    • trupty says:

      thanks chintan for your support… i would surely come up with my ideas πŸ™‚

    • @chintan..
      you saw this…she took my one post..now I’ll have to write one for myself, I was about to post this in mine so that she could understand how good she writes 😦 😦 😦 😦

      Isn’t her writing is good..I told her..she was not believing me 😦

  3. nihar says:

    gud1….aftr smdays da 2nd part ll come named “used 2 b quiet valley” wd lots f traffic jams….

  4. bikash says:

    it was a bouncer for me…i hope i would have been there wid u to give u company in ur solitariness…..;)

  5. Ankit Kumar says:

    Hey !!!! Nice Poem !!!

    Please Feel free to share your world !!!

    Welcome as Blogger !!!

  6. situ says:

    Awsome dear…u think so deep …gr8…keep it it up.

  7. kumar shanu says:

    1st Love with Nature…… very nice……… & I can say Fantastic Start…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    Keep it Up…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  8. atul kumar panda says:

    gr8…. finally u did it… gr8 ideas..nature lover..how do u think so deep!!!!

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